Wednesday, March 10, 2010

The Lying Website Comments

Rating: 4.0

My teacher has been relying on a website to make the grades for him.
But all my friends and me know it's a bad idea.
For the fact it lies about the answers,
like 7x7=84 when it really equals fourty-nine.
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Rita Cerniglia 13 March 2010

What I like about your poetry is that there is humor in every catastrophe. You can laugh at dramatic situations, which allows the mood to be tense, but diffuses any possibility of becoming overly depressing. You are talented!

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