Thursday, June 21, 2018

The Mask Comments

Rating: 4.8

My smile hides my tears.
My laugh hides my screams.
It's been this way for years.
Things aren't as they seem.
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Caressa Dove
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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Well conceived and nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme from the heart. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Caressa.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 June 2018

An eloquent expression of a depressive mind. However, I entirely agree to the point mentioned by poet Robert Murray Smith. Depression should be treated. Meditation and yoga exercises also help.

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Robert Murray Smith 21 June 2018

Depression is not a mask. It is a serious illness that must be treated. There is plenty of help theses days.To mask depression is foolish and counter-productive. A well wriiten poem.++10

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