Jade lousie

Rookie (15 mar 1993)

The Mirror - Poem by Jade lousie

I look, and see.
In the mirror above,
I hear the thoughts of a girl in love.
I look left and right to see whats within,
she looks at me but still no grin.
I look deeper and deeper into her eye,
the fires burning but still no light.
Her soles alive but her bodies died.
I question the thoughts
inside her head.
Movement is possible, but the life is gone
So still..so sad.
I can barly go on.
what to say?
what to do?
especially when you realize
that girl
.......is you

Comments about The Mirror by Jade lousie

  • (5/8/2011 10:44:00 PM)

    I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, May 9, 2011

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