Sunday, May 8, 2011

The Mirror Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look, and see.
In the mirror above,
I hear the thoughts of a girl in love.
I look left and right to see whats within,
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 May 2011

I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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