I look into the mirror
but all I see
looking back at me
it sadness
I look into the mirror
but all I see
looking back at me
is tears
I look into the mirror
but all I see
looking back at me
is nothing
I look into the mirror
but all I see
looking back at me
is scars
I look into the mirror
and I realize
that all I am
is sadness, tears, and scars
a nothing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love the structure, but I feel you left more on the table to be said, that there was more to the story. The structure is there, the meaning, the story, but not your trademark depth.