Thursday, June 8, 2017

The Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Raining
and the wind blows into the room bringing cold air
and the yellow light from the lamp
and the silence
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Lam Dang
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Chinedu Dike 29 September 2019

Well expressed thoughts nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Lam.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2017

Rain and its effects, the situation in the room which brings u into silence..... night and privacy.. psychological effects too..... thank yu dear poet for this poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 June 2017

A nice poetic atmosphere. Thanks

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