Jessica lee Workman

Rookie (January 2,1994 / born in Spokane Washington live in Post Falls Idaho)

The Moon - Poem by Jessica lee Workman

every time i see the moon i smile and just like when i was a kid i still think the moon is following me in the car and i will admit it but whenever i can't see the moon at night, i die a little inside

Jessica Lee Workman

Comments about The Moon by Jessica lee Workman

  • Wahab Abdul (2/29/2012 11:40:00 PM)

    An exquisite piece of poetry….a smart attempt and extraordinary effort, thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/31/2011 12:33:00 PM)

    4got Happy New Year x (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2011 12:32:00 PM)

    I smile when seeing the moon too, I like to think he's something of a minder looking down and protecting us. I think it might be an idea (as this is quite a short poem) to break the sentences up. This is a nice poem and it would sound and read differently to the reader. What do you think? :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2011 5:52:00 AM)

    If you tried making it a bit rhyming that would sound better YET I really like it since I have my own little obsession on the moon :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 31, 2011

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