Saturday, June 4, 2011

The Mountain Of The Verdant Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

You treated her like sh#t,
And you’ll be buried next to her:
But, I ate your wife’s pus#y better than
You’ll ever eat your wife’s pus#y-
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Robert Rorabeck
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 June 2011

I loved the way you wrote the poem. The poem is extremely rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rated it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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