Thursday, June 8, 2006
The Old Man's Plan Comments
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'Old Man, why do you walk? '
'Look son, I've got no time for talk.
The doc says I need to lower my cholesterol.
There ain't no time for me to rest a'tall.'
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Glaedr the poet
08 June 2006
Interesting, it combines pride, health issues, and some Christian/Religious elements, very interesting indeed. I hope to receive some comments from you on my works if it pleases you and you have the time...
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12/10/2025 12:04:54 PM # 1.0.0
Mary, I like the vigor and determined spirit. A poem with attitude... well done! Brian