The One Poem by RANJITH D HEBBAR

The One

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I feel like I left from ONE,
I feel like I got hurt from ONE,
I feel like I m confused by ONE,
And I think the confuse it's self ONE.

It was so hard to believe,
It was so shock to see,
I felt depressed that moment,
Which was the painful event.

Not the GOD, not the HUMAN,
Not like THING'S which comes like KING,
It's just the time, it's just the line,
Which is ONE and want to be ONE...

Friday, June 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: confused
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my 1st poem, which will be dedicated for my loved one, were you can see the word ONE in the poem refers to loved person. The 1st four lines will say about the hurt and confused of lovedone feelings expressed towards me, and the 2nd four lines will speak about the hurt which was in me was reinforcing me in thoughts, and last four lines will tell about the comparison in confusion taking the 'thing' as main motive because the thing can change u anytime anywhere at anyplace...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 03 June 2017

Nice. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 13 June 2014

very nice and beautiful, I like it, thanks.

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