Sunday, August 6, 2006

The Open Eyes Comments

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How often a thought of unfair deeds,
Terribly haunt my vain guilty mind,
Shaking inner self, core of conscience,
The wanton pleasures of indelible past,
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Muhammad Shanazar
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Sadiqullah Khan 16 May 2008

sensitive write, , , , some good lines indeed, ,

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Uzma Jamil 27 February 2008

The poem is a beautiful account of how on certain occasions an impulsive action can cause a sense of guilt and constant repentance for all times to come. A stone hurled with full force fell heavily on a weak bird and: Instantly the delicate breathing life, Was lying prostrate, crumbled, motionless, Tha limb neck hung with ajar beak, ''O! Man what wrong did I do to thee? '' Take care. Truly Uzma.

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