The Origin Of Sin Poem by Tatiana Mihai

The Origin Of Sin

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absconded by desire
captiously entertaining
lavishly spending
your whole self
on a mere trivial
thing
that breaks your mind
with its forbidden
fruit
whereas the real
pleasure lies in the
root

Thursday, May 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sin
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 17 May 2018

Great lines! A work of an intricate mind. Thought provoking, clear, focused, and factual. A witty rendition set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing Tatiana and do remain enriched.

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T M 17 May 2018

Thanks a lot for your comment!

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