The Other War Poem by Remya Sasindran

The Other War

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The blood bath of pride
And the battle of wills
Were abandoned

To be…

To be more
To be another
And maybe even
To be again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Naive, poor choice of words

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Barry A. Lanier 11 January 2009

Well worded and very creative...read my 'To High A Price' and see if we can relate, , , , , , thanks for sharing

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Remya Sasindran

Remya Sasindran

Nilambur, Kerala, India
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