Kristen Otto

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The Pain - Poem by Kristen Otto

I feel like jumping out of my skin
i feel like your mad

and i can understand why
Cant catch my breath

hearts pumping overtime
waiting for you to show up

couldnt you at least have the dignity to show up?
I thought you were fine

i said i was sorry
and i never would want to do that again

but everyone makes mistakes
i'll never ever do this again

i want to promise you this

but i'm not perfect
and i cant help it if i do again

but i really dont want to
so
please forgive me

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  • (4/23/2006 10:15:00 PM)


    Very intense poem! It has such a honest and sincere tone, it almost makes the reader say 'I forgive you' in the end, only to mke you feel better!
    A very good piece of work!

    ~~Elya Thorn~~
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 17, 2010


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