Friday, March 20, 2015

The Pain Of Memories & Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

raindrops today
which kissed my soul,
felt as if, they were my own;
like the tears, which have flowed,
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Janak Desai
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Janak Desai 20 March 2015

Thank you all

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A work eliciting pathos from the Reader, this is, which is good literary acumen and execution...Solid penning...Keep that pen pumping, J.D. ~FjR~

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Janak Desai 21 March 2015

I value your the thoughts / comment you made here. I write mostly in three Indian languages, and constantly study the rules of poetry writing. I am now writing more and more in English, but have never studied the English literature. Your comments today have inspired me to go that route with more vigor. Thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 20 March 2015

A touching work. Thank you for sharing

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Janak Desai 21 March 2015

Every comment is helpful. i value them. Thank You.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 March 2015

yes, the raindrops today, which kissed my soul, felt as if they were my own a beautiful metaphor..................10

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Janak Desai 21 March 2015

I write in four languages, and in each one, I always study to improve the use of metaphor. Metaphors are powerful, but mastering them is a never ending study. I appreciate what you have said.

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