raindrops today
which kissed my soul,
felt as if, they were my own;
like the tears, which have flowed,
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A work eliciting pathos from the Reader, this is, which is good literary acumen and execution...Solid penning...Keep that pen pumping, J.D. ~FjR~
I value your the thoughts / comment you made here. I write mostly in three Indian languages, and constantly study the rules of poetry writing. I am now writing more and more in English, but have never studied the English literature. Your comments today have inspired me to go that route with more vigor. Thank you.
yes, the raindrops today, which kissed my soul, felt as if they were my own a beautiful metaphor..................10
I write in four languages, and in each one, I always study to improve the use of metaphor. Metaphors are powerful, but mastering them is a never ending study. I appreciate what you have said.
Thank you all