Tuesday, July 19, 2011

The Past Comments

Rating: 4.3

Still
the past sits
by our pains-plate
like a crow waiting to
eat the carcass of our dreams.
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Akwasi Aidoo
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 July 2011

It was a wonderful poem composed with great skill. Fine imagery. Congratulations! Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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