The Perfect Guy Poem by Angellica Castillo

The Perfect Guy



When the first time I saw you I already liked you.
It's because of your hair,
But your hair was covering your face.

The next day I saw you again, I saw you smilling.
My heart started to beat faster.
And I liked you more than yesterday.

That night I can't stop thinking of you.
I wasn't contented when I didn't saw your face.
I didn't know what to do.

The following day I looked at you closely.
I didn't blink just once so that I can see your face.
Your friend called you and it was the name that my heart always wanted.

When you turned around I....
Woke up from my sleep.
It was only a dream, but it's like almost real.

I didn't gave up finding that perfect guy.
But I did find him; he was exactly like the guy in my dream.
After he knew everything he just had to say goodbye.

He's the only guy that my heart always shouts,
And I love him just the way he is 'cause he's my PERFECT GUY.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nia Riz 31 January 2009

a beautiful poem! ...but there are some grammer errors here...you have written 'But I did found him; '.... it is supposed to be 'but i did find him' or 'but i had found him'.. Nia

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