Thursday, October 17, 2024

The Phoenix Comments

Rating: 5.0

She flies at night settling on rooftops
Invisible, but no stranger to children
Who understand her mystical ways
With innocence and open hearts.
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Good write. Enjoyed how you progress the imagery and narrative in the poem. "she gathers Souls under her rainbow wings" want to read again.5*

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