Flying Lemming

Rookie - 95 Points (England)

The 'Poem A Day' Project - Day 56 - Poem by Flying Lemming

Criticism affects us different ways
Some will feel the pain for days
When someone feels the vile need
To do their best to try to impede
Any attempt to make or create
Something, be it minor or great

I find more amusement than hurt
When someone wants to throw the dirt
I look past the front of aggression
And any negative thoughts soon lesson

The thing that you must ask yourself
Just how strong is their mental health
If they need to belittle and chide
Behind a screen so they can hide

You’ll find that those that criticise
Tend to have the emptiest lives
And feel the need to take a dig
To try to make themselves feel big

Don’t feel anger or negativity
Critics just deserve your pity


Comments about The 'Poem A Day' Project - Day 56 by Flying Lemming

  • (10/1/2007 10:03:00 PM)

    I stop commenting for a couple days and you take a hammering... that's not on! ! You take care now, Ciao Deana E-P (Report)Reply

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  • (10/1/2007 5:15:00 PM)

    how does criticism affect you? ? ? if i need pity... please be poetic about it in a poem.
    why do you post? ? ?

    i'll gift you false praise if you feel it'll help. yr doing just fine...like what i just written really counts.

    all yr poems will not receive candy. nor do mine. and u have more poems posted, than i do. don't post bullshit or delet yr unedited shit and no one will remember anyway... if what you write ain't memorable. take care.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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