Thursday, March 4, 2010

The Pool Comments

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Water still and running deep
I dangle my toes in from my seat
Fish see darting all around
But when I listen not a sound
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Jim O'Donnell
Dad fish fishing swimming
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 March 2010

This is poignantly beautiful and refreshingly vivid, i like the first lines that paint a view of the scenery and the memories of a loving father that laced the last lines. 10++++

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Jim O'Donnell

Jim O'Donnell

Glasgow
Jim O'Donnell
Jim O'Donnell
Glasgow
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