Tuesday, January 8, 2008

The Rain In My Soul Comments

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I feel the rain beating down on my soul
Washing away all my pain
A cleansing of the dirt that clutters my path
An opening of my eyes so I can see again
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James Waters
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Anita Atina 08 January 2008

James, this is a wonderful composition. Personal yet universal. Uncannily I used similar imagery in a poem today, called 'Is life a predictable emotion'. Cheers, Anita

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