Thursday, June 29, 2017

The Raven's Field Comments

Rating: 5.0

A raven sat upon a branch
That reigned above a golden field
Where sunlight lent a golden hue
To yellow grass which swayed and swooned
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Jessie Michaels
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 June 2017

Nature is a great blessing and its poetry, too. Thanks

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Daniel Brick 29 June 2017

This is exactly what a nature walk should accomplish, that is, your immersion in the natural world as a human being. You don't dissolve into nature, you blend with it as a fellow denizen, a respectful observer, more than willing to wait patiently until you become not just a visitor but one of the many who are earthlings all. And the promise of more such walks into the shared landscape is the perfect ending.

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Tom Allport 29 June 2017

a lovely poem of sharing and taking in nature's beautiful blessing's? ................well written.

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