Sunday, October 29, 2017

The Regrets Comments

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Good day, Diana May!
Her smile breaks the day!

Looks like she were holding a trophy
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Asim Mahmood
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017

One world wasn't enough for two Like me and you.. The bird couldn't help rue, If it were not for you.. I would have long time flew.... loved these lines. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Asim Mahmood 06 November 2017

So many thanks Kumarmani!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 October 2017

A wonderful piece of work. The intensity of love reflected in your write provides a different taste.. the flow rethym and the rhymes and the way it is penned is commendable..! 10

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Asim Mahmood 06 November 2017

Thank you Dr. Dilip!

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