Liam Hughes

Rookie - 481 Points (25/03/1991 / Bedfordshire, UK)

The Rise And Fall - Poem by Liam Hughes

The sky may be too high for me to reach
But I wouldn't like the feel of it anyway
The ones who say your obliged to teach
Do not have any knowledge to give away

The floor may be right beneath my feet
But I'm given the chance to fly away
Now me and the sky are about to meet
I wonder if it'll make me want to stay

The lack of air makes it hard to breath
The clouds look soft but feel like ocean spray
The fall to come makes it hard to leave
But soon the clouds would become dark and grey

As I finaly hit the floor once again
The clouds thicken and trees begin to sway
As i realise I'm still in the pouring rain
I should've gone in the direction I'm about to pray


Comments about The Rise And Fall by Liam Hughes

  • Barbara Nixon (1/26/2013 9:18:00 AM)


    Great poem, very descriptive, and great imagery. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 26, 2013



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