The Riverbank Comments

Really an interesting narrative written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

he hacked and slashed and yelled in tears wasting his voice as a tree has no ears.... the tree was dead. i went home to bed...... very good poem. emotions of rage, questioning, destruction..... and the poet watching it all...... tha nkyou for this poem full of emotion and thinking. tony

Well written man, keep writing and sharing! Love it! ! ! !

Narration of the river, the oak tree and the rage of the farmer who ultimately axed the old tree are remarkable and made the poem touching. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.10 points.