Saturday, February 27, 2010

The Road I Took To Reach You. Comments

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Do you know how it feels,
standing out here, more clueless than ever.
I can't tell what is real,
not cold but my thoughts get me to shiver.
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Eman Awad
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Ellery Lim 27 February 2010

nice poem. perhaps you could add more irony, more power. especially in this kind of a love/hate journey kind of poem. very simple theme, adjusted to fit many. great job.7.5++

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