Friday, November 23, 2012

The Rosy Red Rosé Comments

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you're sweet as sugar,
you're beautiful as a rosy red rosé
you're cheeks lights up as if
you're about to bloom right into summer
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Armando Barajas
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Asif Andalib 24 November 2012

Beautiful write but I have a suggestion. Break the big lines into smaller ones thus make it free verse

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