Saturday, March 31, 2007

The Sands Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pedals to the metal
Moving film has reached it's credits
The grains of sand are campaigning
to the hourglasses merits
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JoAnn McGrath
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David Harris 07 April 2007

JoJo, lovely imagery here. Lovely poem. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Marci Made 31 March 2007

Just beautiful, nice use of metaphors, ....thanks for this one jojo......mm.xo

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