The Scarlet Ibis, Section VII Poem by Susan Hahn

The Scarlet Ibis, Section VII

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Bird

Once, I got lost,
flew over that place,
saw the tourists in their wrinkled pastels.
The memorial between the barracks B
The bronze barbed-wire figures twisted
to torment, the wedged-shaped
building, its barred entrance,
the strip of marble extending
through a hole in the roof,
the menorah resting at the top.
I felt weak
and landed on it.
No one could believe what they saw B
me resting there B
so they pretended not to see.
(pause)
I stood for much more than a moment,
watched all those bare legs
move from spot to spot,
thought how much I needed
to find a way back
to my flock.


Lady

And you expect me to believe this?


Bird

As I do you
(pause)
and do not.

Thursday, May 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: birds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 03 November 2016

i stumbled upon this. i'm not 'into' metaphor. so who actually wrote this poem? a PH member or not? bri :)

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Carly Williams 21 May 2015

I strongly agree with Hannah Newman! The book The Scarlet Ibis, from which this excerpt was taken, is a book of genius, which we read in my poetry seminar at Berkeley and was lauded by our professor as perhaps the finest use of metaphor in a poetry book that he had ever seen. Through metaphor it tells a fascinating story that you will not forget!

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Hannah Newman 21 May 2015

The Scarlet Ibis is one of the finest poetry books of the last twenty years (per my Lit professor at Penn and per me) and this intriguing excerpt supports that statement. I highly recommend the book - which features an extraordinary story replete with brilliant use of metaphor - to all serious readers of poetry.

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