The Sea Poem by Danielle Saunders

The Sea



The first time i saw the sea,
It looked so beautiful to me.
The waves rush upon the shore,
I've never seen such wonderful sight before.

I was entertained by the sound splashes made,
I felt dazzled by the bright colour blue.
I was deep into this but was invade,
I was enthusiastic and surprised i never knew what to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Barnett 18 April 2009

Amazing in how you are able to use the senses quite smoothly. Great job.

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Danielle Saunders

Danielle Saunders

Victoria Jubilee Hospital, Jamaica
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