Tuesday, August 22, 2023

The Sea And The Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

What great passion the sea exerts, as she crashes into the sand
What love the sand exhibits as he calls, with outstretched hand
Spray rises up and waves crash down, when she races to his side
Then vigorously they embrace each other, knee high in the tide
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Herman Hoyte
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D.N. Rebb 23 August 2023

You captured the ecstasy and pain of love perfectly in this metaphor. Great poem. Enjoyed reading it.

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Sandra Feldman 22 August 2023

Absolutely gorgeous and unforgettable, romance.

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Sandra Feldman 22 August 2023

Such an emotionally, well written, romantic poem, Loved it, Oh so much! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 22 August 2023

Such a fantastically gorgeous and romantic love! ADORE

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