The Shadow Of My Death Comments

I like it the way it is....it gave me chills.

I'll also disagree. I think it's a wonderful line to end with. (But, what the heck do I know? ?) It gave me the creeps. (Then again, it is dark here and it don't take much to scare me........) Well, I enjoyed this poem very much. Take care. Sincerely, Mary

I disagree. You say it's passé. If Raynette says it is it will be changed. Thanks anyway. H