The Shimmering Years Poem by Shannon Walker

The Shimmering Years

Rating: 4.5


Shimmering Emily
Hides the sun
The way that our Lady
Of Fatima did when She
Eclipsed the sun
On that October day

A hundred years ago.
But what of the angels?
Do they, in wonder, stare at her
The way they stared at Her,
The way that I, a mere man, must
When he sees his daughter walking away

In her shimmering years.
And so, what is now left
But to let my hair
Grow long and straggly,
Like a Nazarene,
And wait for the King.

Friday, August 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 30 August 2017

A sense of suffering and loss permeates this poem. And then the age old question, now what, sumed up brilliantly in your closing lines.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 August 2017

And so, what is now left But to let my hair Grow long and straggly, Like a Nazarene, And wait for the King. Beauty of hopefulness..Nice stanza poet. 10+ for it. Subhas

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