James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Saturday, November 5, 2016

The Shore Of The Sea Smelled Of Me Comments

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I cast my net into the sea,
gathering small fish to feed to the bird's
so they'd leave.
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Bri Edwards 05 November 2016

i can't help myself: would by they be recognized as the unforgiving blue ghosts in the gloom. ..................do you really mean to use they, or did you mean to use then or them? so you have been entertaining and keeping the beach intellectuals company? can one pickle a sea cucumber, i wonder. no wonder you used green as the topic. ha ha ha! doesn't everyone want someone who Care's about them.....i know i DO. i'd guess most people do want that, even if they don't realize it. ghosts in the gloom............i like the alliteration. bri :)

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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