Sunday, December 4, 2016

The Sky Comments

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a vast hope waiting
the clouds floating on the blue
the clouds in a rhythm
the colours of rainbow in a lovely row
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Muhammad Iqbal Hossain Rasik
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Ravi A 04 December 2016

Look at the sky is highly repetitive and takes away the charm of the essence of the poem. The same ideas can be reformatted with your own skills. Telling something does not constitute the aesthetic dimension of any poem. It requires a different approach.

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