Look at the sky is highly repetitive and takes away the charm of the essence of the poem. The same ideas can be reformatted with your own skills. Telling something does not constitute the aesthetic dimension of any poem. It requires a different approach.
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Look at the sky is highly repetitive and takes away the charm of the essence of the poem. The same ideas can be reformatted with your own skills. Telling something does not constitute the aesthetic dimension of any poem. It requires a different approach.