Monday, November 26, 2018

The Sliver-Tongued Devil Comments

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I said I'd live forever
Thought this to be cunning, apt, and clever
And on lonely hills I met a man
From there my endless life began
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 September 2019

I begged the man to let me die And when he laughed I began to cry Again he whispered in my ears Sweet sweet words that stilled my tears Again and again I fell for his trick.. again you are poetic. great expressions of an imaginative experience. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Damian M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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