Freshman - 912 Points (19/12/93 / Sonepur, ODISHA< INDIA)

The Slow Breeze - Poem by TADASHA TRIPATHY

The slow breeze
Coming inside my room
Makes me severe
Again and again
In first step of spring
Not much hot or
Not much cold
But with overflowing
Happiness, joy
A feelings of saturation
May be with new vapour
In last winter.

Comments about The Slow Breeze by TADASHA TRIPATHY

  • Geetha Jayakumar (3/1/2014 11:27:00 AM)

    Yes, it is lovely flow of breeze, neither too hot nor too cold. Beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (2/28/2014 7:26:00 PM)

    It is here within, fine feeling, I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 28, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, March 7, 2014

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