{the Sonnet Of My Hearts Desires} Poem by Lillian Jamison

{the Sonnet Of My Hearts Desires}

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All the paths I have set footprints on
My lone sojourns have not been easy
Inside my heart, hope continued to burn
That I would encounter my completion

My heart and souls deepest connection
Someone so true to give all my love to
One who hears me when I speak of love
Who can appreciate the woman that I am

He feels that I am a find so precious, so rare
As unto him I give all of my undying passions
Unafraid to express how much our love means
A man in totality, eternally we shall be as one

Never doubt my love, the true mate of my soul
For you my beloved, fulfill all my hearts desires

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 26 September 2007

'For you my beloved, fullfill my heart's desires'...is a summation of a ture love! Sublime poem, highest mark.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 September 2007

Then, of course, there are those who forget entire words, like''Send a private message to this poet'...but we all can't be tactfull, for if so, how else would the world wide web be notified of our rare literary faux-pas? ! This is a gorgeous piece of work...Smooth, mellifluous, and captivating... There a most likely millions of ways to express Passion via the written word... Yours is most definitely one of the better ways! Excellent Work, young lady. ~ ~ ~

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Lucianne Fasolo 24 September 2007

This was very nice! I liked it very much, :) I only have one question for you. 'One who hears my when I speak of love' I was kinda confused here with this 'my'. I know exactly what you're saying, but something's missing. Maybe you forgot to type a word? : P Nice job with the poem.

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