indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

The Spell You Cast... - Poem by indira babbellapati

... and when the invisible
and the indivisible forces
of all the universe connived
to pull me into your spell
least did i think the spell cast
would alter everything
that concerns me including my self
and when i sat in the silent
terrain of my being last evening
least did i expect the planets to
come down to whisper into my ears
the tidings you've conveyed...
touched by you, they looked
resplendent on an otherwise
pale lonely sky...

they sang me a lullaby
in a chorus that i slip into
a sleep sweetly cuddled
in your arms...

10feb2010
14.45hrs


Comments about The Spell You Cast... by indira babbellapati

  • (2/11/2010 11:53:00 PM)


    indira:
    A beautiful write. Rich imagery of the heavens (all the universe) conniving to cast a spell of good omen... very intense emotion. Enjoy the read & thanx for sharing.

    Blessings.
    Leonard
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (2/10/2010 4:48:00 AM)


    natures arms.................. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 7, 2010


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