Although it's a sad refrain it is well written with a nice flow to it. It expresses the hurt & pain well within the poem.
not sure what you were trying to say 'the engulfs the heart'- maybe 'it engulfs the heart'
Ravensong
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Although it's a sad refrain it is well written with a nice flow to it. It expresses the hurt & pain well within the poem. not sure what you were trying to say 'the engulfs the heart'- maybe 'it engulfs the heart' Ravensong