The Story Of Fish Poem by L.N Zhao

The Story Of Fish

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register myself to a stranded feelings,
seems thinking too much become guilt
I am the fish in the shore,
restive in the shallow water of the sand
and satisfy the short ambiguous sweet.
Take me to the sea or I will die.

P.S this poem I wrote about one year ago, seems very naive, haha...the first day met this forum so just picked up something of mine and posted here.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 11 October 2009

such a fish.. when close too shore.. lays in wait for shallow water.. then the other comes along.. and waves touch both with magic..iip

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