L.N Zhao

The Story Of Fish

register myself to a stranded feelings,
seems thinking too much become guilt
I am the fish in the shore,
restive in the shallow water of the sand
and satisfy the short ambiguous sweet.
Take me to the sea or I will die.

P.S this poem I wrote about one year ago, seems very naive, haha...the first day met this forum so just picked up something of mine and posted here.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2009

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Comments about The Story Of Fish by L.N Zhao

  • James MclainJames Mclain (10/11/2009 6:50:00 PM)

    such a fish..
    when close too shore..
    lays in wait for shallow water..
    then the other comes along..
    and waves touch both with magic..iip

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