Friday, September 25, 2015

The Strawberry Tart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Four wee hungry bairns
Desperate for a treat
Spot a strawberry tart
And stumble to their feet
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Peter Bain
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 25 September 2015

Very wonderful expression of your emotion expresses well your thoughts in this poem....10

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Douglas Scotney 25 September 2015

brazen hussy mothers eating tarts is the issue bairns are facing, alright.

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