The Stream Poem by Byju V

The Stream

Rating: 5.0


the long
march of ants -
flowing stream

Wednesday, April 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kewayne Wadley 06 April 2016

Niccce. You know upon reading. I can see a portrait of marching ants Hung on the wall. First thing that comes to mind. I don't mean this In a bad way at all. I like how your able to capture so much with so little words. Just perfect! Picture perfect. Then on top of that I like ants hahaha. KW

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