~the Suicidal Dark~ Poem by Carissa McBride

~the Suicidal Dark~

Rating: 5.0


The fortress is crumbling down
all signs of hope now forever vanished.

No one to understand
No one to see

All around you is now so shi**y

Your life once so bright,
has now turned black

As your pretty face wrinkles,
with the signs of sadness

The black only gets worse

The suicidal thoughts now come home,
my heart welcomes the familiar

Long red lines stain my body

All a climax part
to the inevitable suicidal dark
.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 30 January 2009

Dark and emotional write SHADOW, your lyrics are deep and pour down the page....nicely done my friend................keep expressing Best wishes Jon

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