Tuesday, March 24, 2015

The Time For Death Comments

Rating: 4.8

It is the time to die,
You can't wait for it.
There is waiting Satan's eye,
Game over, it's time to quit.
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Maciej Bes
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Chinedu Dike 11 April 2015

I see depression rearing its ugly head within the lines of this piece of poetry. If only one can keep the faith and learn to take things and situations in stride, one will overcome and conquer depression. A lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 29 March 2015

Dark and brooding words. Thanks for sharing.

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