Makayla Straight
I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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The Truth About Forever

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How long is forever really?
You told me you'd love me forever and ever.
I actually believed you.
Forever is really short if its how long we made it.
Which was not long at all.
I gave you my heart,
And you took it for granted.
I can't believe I was that blind
That I did not see that we would never make it.
Forever sounds like a long time,
But you have proven it is really really short.
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Nesmah Elsayed 20 May 2009
this is my favortie...i love the words, and the interanl conflict of your love! you should write it in a little bit more poetic theme...bigger words. use a thesaurus, thats what i did when i was your age. i startted wrting when i was 10. and hey, im only 15 now...everyone needs help with words(;
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Eyan Desir 05 May 2009
Good write but you dont need to write all over the page... i will give you top marks ............................................................ ...
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Chitra - 05 May 2009
a sensitve graph of waiting, realizing and then moving on you are indeed a mature emotional soul
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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 May 2009
Beautiful realization, nicely composed.
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Pandian Angelina 01 May 2009
'I am glad that forever is not long at' wonderful transitions written in so simple a language showing the various stages of longing and the realisation and acceptance. Wonderful piece of poetry Kay Kay
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