How long is forever really?
You told me you'd love me forever and ever.
I actually believed you.
Forever is really short if its how long we made it.
Which was not long at all.
I gave you my heart,
And you took it for granted.
I can't believe I was that blind
That I did not see that we would never make it.
Forever sounds like a long time,
But you have proven it is really really short.
Forever sounded like a wonderful long time with you.
But now I see your real colors,
I am glad that forever is not long at all with you.
Good write but you dont need to write all over the page... i will give you top marks ............................................................ ...
a sensitve graph of waiting, realizing and then moving on you are indeed a mature emotional soul
'I am glad that forever is not long at' wonderful transitions written in so simple a language showing the various stages of longing and the realisation and acceptance. Wonderful piece of poetry Kay Kay
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is my favortie...i love the words, and the interanl conflict of your love! you should write it in a little bit more poetic theme...bigger words. use a thesaurus, thats what i did when i was your age. i startted wrting when i was 10. and hey, im only 15 now...everyone needs help with words(;