The Unborn Star Poem by Derrick Clark

The Unborn Star

Rating: 5.0


Who am I, the star living as a entity.
Hopeing someday, when is my chance to shine.
Seeking around, while everyone else is bright.
Why as I, feeling disconsolate and dark.
Imagining when my time.When my light will be bright.
Patiently as I emerge, when my time be near.
Only thing I hope, is when my light will be bright.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Fischer 26 April 2007

Your light will be bright. Remember: You have to believe in yourself before others can believe in you. Good write. Well thought out and well executed. Top marks! -Michael

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Derrick Clark

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tulare california
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