The Very Last Stand Poem by Ailish Canning
The Very Last Stand
Take this knife from my hand,
Give me a moment to make my stand.
The one last breath before I go,
Flashing before me I wont say no.
Feel the knife catch my heart,
Will I get a new start.
To be a flower in another life,
Or keep fighting with my sith.
To keep my heart beating,
Beating, beating lets en this meeting.
6 feet under silence at last,
Will I start a new life and forget my past?
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5/12/2024 6:00:21 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A couple of typos, but this is the strongest of the poems I have read. You have let the reader feel what it is you are thinking in your mind and heart. This is the kind of language you need to use. Paint a picture with your words, so the reader can actually see what is unfolding. I hope I didn't sound mean! -Robin xoxo