Tuesday, July 17, 2012
The Very Last Stand Comments
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Take this knife from my hand,
Give me a moment to make my stand.
The one last breath before I go,
Flashing before me I wont say no.
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Ailish Canning
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12/28/2025 6:40:09 AM # 1.0.0
A couple of typos, but this is the strongest of the poems I have read. You have let the reader feel what it is you are thinking in your mind and heart. This is the kind of language you need to use. Paint a picture with your words, so the reader can actually see what is unfolding. I hope I didn't sound mean! -Robin xoxo