Thursday, January 19, 2012

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Swirling around a crimson rose,
sat a bee writhed in smiles,
on a petal nice with shine,
slipped to her core!
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Rajendran Muthiah
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Aleksandra Szymanska 19 January 2012

sounds like bees these days are 'magical' 'ELFs'... I wonder if it's really healthy for the rose to let the bee buzz inside her core. Let's hope she won't get diagnosed with dyskaryosis or something greater... Wonderful, little write - I love the visuals, the overall humor...

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Madurai District, Tamil Nadu, India.
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